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Thursday, 6 July 2017

I made the cookies

WALT to show not tell
I enjoyed finding a photo
I found challenging thinking of new things to write

1 comment:

  1. Hi Lucy!

    My name is Ellee and I will be blogging with you this summer for the Summer Learning journey!

    This is some awesome descriptive writing about cookies...it made me feel very hungry! I also liked that you put it into a video so I could listen to your story that is so creative! I am hoping I will be able to see some more of your posts like this one over the summer!

    If you want to check out the Summer Learning Journey website you can follow this link: https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/

    Here is also a link to the weekly activities:
    https://sites.google.com/site/summerlearningjourney/weekly-activities

    Remember each activity is worth points so make sure once you’ve finished an activity post it up on your blog so we can add it to your total!

    Hopefully I'll see you blogging over the summer soon!

    Ellee :)

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Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.