Welcome to my blog. I am a student at Paroa School in Greymouth, NZ.
Hello Lucy great slide next step you do a DLO reading it.
Hi Luly! I like how you clearly stated that you animation was about Matariki. Next time maybe you could try to make the actual storyline clearer? Thanks!
Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.
Hello Lucy great slide next step you do a DLO reading it.
ReplyDeleteHi Luly! I like how you clearly stated that you animation was about Matariki. Next time maybe you could try to make the actual storyline clearer? Thanks!
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