I had to make a pick a path story and put it on my blog. I don't think it is my best work but I enjoyed making it. I enjoyed thinking of things to write. I found it challenging to choose what was going to happen. To be BTB(Better Than Before) I could make it longer and have more exciting things happen. You have to click whatever answer you choose and it will take you to that slide.
Well done Lucy! I liked your story, I picked the stinging nettle and then running away from the bear instead of throwing a stone as it and I got home safe! I wonder how you think you could make this your best work since you said you don't think it is?
ReplyDeleteI think I could make it better by making it longer and more interesting. I thought maybe I could do levels andsoif you made it safley through this one then you get to do a level two.
DeleteI think that is a great idea. Just remember that longer work isn't always better quality. Maybe you could start by adding more detail? Why did the bear first start chasing us?
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