My childhood
My annoying goat. My Grandad Bob's boat.
My fishing rod. My floating log.
My ballet shoes. My giant bruise.
My fish feeding. My book reading.
My top shed. My messy bed.
My dog Bella. My dog Stella.
My electric fence. My collecting pence.
My chalkboard. My dance award.
My poem writing. My kayaking.
My feeding mice. My "That's nice".
My writing books. My building hooks.
My cat Shilly. My "Dad's silly".
My drawing cats. My doing maths.
My "Mother said". My dog Meg.
My dog Tess. My bedroom's a mess.
My cow Twig. My Wilbur the pig.
My old hat. My patting the cat.
My race running. My calf chasing.
My riding horses. My jumping courses.
My cow riding. My para-sailing.
Hi Lucy, Emma here.
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed reading this poem, and I found it very interesting.
To be BTB (Better Than Before) next time you could try and make some sentences rhyme a bit more.
But other than that it was great! Keep up the good work.,
Thanks Emma, I was thinking the same thing but, oh well
DeleteLucy